My Letter to LDWF Commission on Tripletail Regulation

[MathGeek]

Originally Posted by Reggoh

I would move Paragraph #3 down to the bottom just above the last paragraph... I think by saying "There is no scientific data..." and then immediately asking question after question about the scientific data sounds a little condescending...

To me it sounds better to ask those questions in paragraph 4 and then in summary at the bottom say "There doesn't seem to be any scientific data..."

A definite improvement. Thanks.